Review of Food Memoir Introduction.

Look over your peer’s comments. Write a short reflection on what you plan to do in your next draft.

Both of my group members commented on my use of language and diction, or rather overuse of it. It appears I will need to tone down the level of wording used. This may prove difficult as my use of strong diction is a natural inclination, not a conscious decision.

An undercurrent was that the reading should be tailored more for a general audience.

Are your peers comments helpful? Why or why or not.

The comments themselves were well thought. Whether or not they will prove helpful hinges on my ability to follow properly.